Feedback:

From the feedback we received, i am going to check all of my blogs for spelling and punctuation errors, as well as making sure that i keep up to date with blogs and document the progress with the project. However, the project is moving along at  a good pace.

Feedback:

After reading the feedback it is clear that i need to change the format of my blog as well as adding in labels. In addition to this, i need to speak more in depth about how the planning and research links in with my project. The posts on my blog need to become more varied in terms of using videos, soundcloud, images and power points.